But I do want to draw attention to the meta aspect of some of my caps. I think it's possible to weave them in and still be in character without ruining the fantasy. I think it's in character for some people to be very self referential, especially larger than life personas. And Smitty definitely considers what he does as a form of art, or at least show business.
And I've definitely taken it further than I have in this cap, sometimes to the detriment of the caps. I think that it's better to play with the balance now and then though so you can try and find that sweet spot. What do you think?
Breaking of featurette.. Sounds like it might be a fun tour into utter humiliation, but i have to say. zap me with the 'devil', rip the clothespin in one tug, flog me, tug my hair, or twist my nipples till I scream out my safe word.
ReplyDeleteBut don't break my fingers or kick out my teeth, kinda ruins the romantic mood you had set up with nipple twisting and hair pulling.
I loved the revenge note access and it seems that Smitty is pretty obsessed in finding him, hope this guy in 10 steps ahead because being Smitty ass slut sounds awful!
wait.. I've been in a Smitty cap before, I've been a butt slut! never mind then.. the more the merrier!
Favorite part in the series was when he discussed his fondness for anal sex. heh. ^_^
Thanks. Yeah I decided to take Smitty to a different level in this one in his off screen descriptions of violence. It's hopefully not a turn on for anyone reading it either fantasizing about receiving or giving it. But that's part of the fun part of doing looooooong caps. You can throw in stuff that's pure character work or setting tone and people can still enjoy the parts of straight up raunch.
ReplyDeleteYeah I get that. And It really set the tone for this caption, so I wonder where you might be going with this story line.
ReplyDeleteThere's so many extremes that can be explored in a forced theme. I have never drawn blood or bruised anyone while training them like the little sluts they are and just love to hate it.
I've played many times with emotional and mental breaking points how ever. I always look at as a way to build them back up if they are almost too far gone.
The furthest I've taking it is when I made the caption of the rapist in hell. till know pain for pain's sake. But in it it was just pure despair for her and she could only relieve it again and again.
The amount of time that had actually passed and the amount of time she still had left was a sort of weapon as well. it's unknown to her if she will ever be free of it, and she was even admitting that she deserved it. but she would wake up again in a fever dream that's all too real and feel like it's been an eternity and put up the fight all over again.
pretty big mind fuck when she does get to go free, almost would have been kinder to keep her locked in.
Yeah I always thought that was a really bold cap. It was very extreme, to a degree that you actually question whether even the worst rapist could deserve that.
ReplyDeleteAs for where I'm going with the storyline, I'm not sure. It also depends if Caitlyn has time and inspiration to collaborate.
smitty,
ReplyDeleteGreat cap. I actually think the over the top cruelty shown by Smitty adds to the story. While I wouldn't want a steady diet of it, its a good tool to use!
Oh... and I got this odd email. It didn't have a sender, and had instructions that I post it for you here. I hope you know what it is talking about as I have no idea:
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Mr Smitty,
Thank you kindly for the film. I was hoping that the red envelop in my PO Box was Netflix simply delivering my next movie selection (Primer). I must admit that I was suspicious when the envelope read "Netfucks; A Division of Smittysgonnagetyou Inc." . I am saddened by the loss of my colleague Dr. Davies. Ironically his last idea may well come to be your own undoing. It seems that Dr Davies was working on the ability to track all nanites. I have reviewed his research and constructed a working prototype. Upon its first test I found a batch of nanites that I had previously cataloged as 'destroyed in experiment'. I of course realized it was from your doppelganger filled up with my nanites. Now imagine my surprise when I found out that not only have you freed her from the humiliation subroutine, but also taught her magic.
I had considered our little back and forth finished. You had won, and I was willing to walk away and let you live out your life knowing that you were superior to technology. But now you have peaked my interest. Nanites infused in a body that has been given the ability to use magic.
Magical Nanites? This will require further study, and I can think of only one test subject.
Yours truly,
Silly me... I was about to sign my name. As you seem to like films, movie villains and heroes, you may refer to me as...
The Technologist
Glad you liked it Caitlyn, and trust me I won't make Smitty's vileness monotonous.
ReplyDeleteHmm...I'll have to pass this email on.
Dear Smitty,
ReplyDeleteReceived the Video, and must say nice job and good riddance to the worthless male. I won't be so easy though, but feel free to try, I wont break no matter what
-the one your looking for
Wow Smitty you're a great writer!
ReplyDeleteWhat's the name of the girl? She's perfect...
ReplyDeleteHer name is Madison Parker.
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