This is no longer the case. The stakes have been raised, and anything goes now. Smitty will never be the same...and now, neither will his victims.
You might have noticed the trend toward darker caps with The Technologist series and the All or Nothing series. These are themes I will continue to explore in the Smittyverse, but I don't feel they match the tone of all my universes. I'd be interested in knowing which universe you guys prefer, and why. If you like, I'll count the answer to that as a separate comment to the one you make on the series.
See how comments can earn you a personalized cap series here...http://smittysimon.blogspot.com/2011/05/captions-for-comments-reminder.html
Smitty's Bed room talk and foreplay has improved tremendously! Well, For Smitty at least. Poor Maddie...
ReplyDeleteThe technologist has his hands full But I'm sure he has a few tricks up his sleeve as well.
Well, Google just told me it was unable to complete my request and completely deleted a VERY long analysis. Now that I've stopped screaming I will try to remember some of the points I was trying to raise. And I'll be copying this before I hit "Post Comment." *ahem*
ReplyDelete1st Thoughts:
Yes, remember what's at stake. What is at stake exactly? Does this schlub think he has a shot at beating Smitty? I deduce he's trying to retain some part of himself. That doesn't work as a suspense device because I know Smitty's powers.
And Smitty has taken the body of Keiran Lee. How nice.
2nd thoughts: Well, that's clever. A brain copy. And memories! OK now something is at stake.
3rd thoughts: The words "grandma" and "grandpa" do not belong here. Bastard. -_-
It looks like Smitty's got the Technologist beat, but then again we only see Smitty's plans. Is the Technologist moving pawns into place? Does he have an agenda? An army of prissy girls transformed into butch dykes to counter the sissy army? Does the Technologist's powers allow him to counter Smitty on the fly if he's outmaneuvered?
On the issue of darkness, I prefer your darker stories. That's not to say I agree with you on the way Smitty's powers are growing or what he does to people. I'm saying I *prefer* it to the other stories where people are whimsically buttfucked over jokes and tea. Sure that's funny but it breaks my fappin' spirit.
Watching Smitty's powers grow I must warn you of two great television series that made horrible mistakes.
1) Resist the temptation to put the world on the line. When you go with a global threat the villain must be thwarted or there is no story thereafter, save "another day where Smitty rapes someone," which will get boring even for Smitty eventually. High School Of The Dead was a great character-driven drama until the nuclear weapons came out. All that wonderful character interaction and development took a back seat to a missile and gun show.
2) Be careful with power absorbing characters; they get out of hand very easily. Sylar from the show Heroes got so out of hand he made Season 3 suck so bad they canceled the show.
Damn, these ideas were put together much better in the first version. Anyway.
Smitty needs redeeming qualities. It's hard to root for him, and I'm rooting against the sissy here. He's become so despicable I'd like to see him get turned into a sissy bimbo slave cum whore slut.
Last point from the original:
What's with all the buttfucking? Why turn them into girls if you're going to buttfuck them anyway? Sure I love titties as much as the next guy, but my logical side is screaming this question out.
...and ctrl A, ctrl C, lest the third version suck even harder...
@green That was all very carefully considered, and I don't want to be dismissive, but I also have to be careful not to give away any surprises, so I'll try to answer the best I can.
ReplyDeleteI know in this one it doesn't seem like Smitty could actually lose, but this is his first time to take on an opponent he would have avoided before. One he realizes will eventually find a way to defeat him if left to his own devices. He's braver now, so he wants to take on prey like this, but also less self destructive, so he neutralizes the threat once he gets his thrills.
As for what The Technologist is up to, I'm not sure, as Caitlyn is working on that one. Her plotline involves time travel, but we'll have to wait and see what she has cooking for Smitty. What she has so far is here...http://caitlynsmasks.blogspot.com/2011/01/fuck-time-travel.html
As for avoiding a global take over, I am way ahead of you on that one. I don't have any plans for that and Smitty is firmly on record of not seeing the point in world conquest. I have some big changes planned, but they shouldn't get in the way of the characters, which is always my favorite part of the story.
As for power sapping, that's pretty much over for now. New Smitty came in to being as a result of that getting out of hand, so he is much more careful in what he takes. Smitty still has tricks up his sleeves, but you'll have to wait and see what they are.
I'm glad people are rooting against Smitty. It will make the dynamic more interesting as The Technologist develops. And putting yourself in the sissy's shoes and hating Smitty futilely is part of the fun. As for him becoming a bimbo slut whore, I think that endings too good for him (also I think it's been done to death, even by me) so I wrote into the Smitty Meets His Match? cap that he tricked a goddess into giving him eternal life as a man. That will be explored more fully later, but for now it forces a different punishment to be enacted on Smitty should he lose.
As for buttfucking, it has to do with humiliation and a tight fit. It's elaborated in a number of my Smitty series, most recently towards the end of Interview with a Smitty.
I hope that answers all your questions.
Well, that does put a few worries to rest. And I don't think the bimbification ending is too good for Smitty, but your imagination out-deviouses mine.
ReplyDeleteInteresting idea, someone trying to overthrow Smitty from the sissy's position. It seems like trying to defeat an elephant by being a peanut, but a mind-controlling, nanite-laced peanut might be able to come up with something.
@ green Well the first time Smitty was soundly defeated it was by a sissy, and if it hadn't been for Ms. Smitty it might have happened again. Like I said, I don't know what's going to happen next in The Technologist series, but I do have some ideas for after it.
ReplyDeleteBy the way, you've reached your tenth comment by my count. If you still want to be in a Trisha cap as worthy womanizing adversary, just let me know what names you want to use for your character. And if not, let me know what kind of cap you would like me to do.