Friday, December 23, 2011

The Initiation Cover and Intro




And here's a flowchart from a helpful fan. This way you can double check to see if you missed any endings. But don't look at it if you don't want any spoilers...

SPOILER ALERT Right click and open in new tab to view it in full size.

26 comments:

  1. What a wise concept Smitty! I've been looking around the "book" you made... well most like cheating *giggle* and I'll make sure to take some time to read all over this! Once again kudos for creating this ^-^

    Hugs and Kisses Alectra

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  2. a masterpiece. Thank you

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  3. Smitty, I will read this. I will make every choice to get every possible ending. It will take me a long time, but I don't even have to start to know that this is one of the most amazing things ever made. You put so much work into every one of your captions and stories, no matter how short or long. Thank you so much for sharing your amazing gifts!

    Have a wonderful Holiday!

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  4. Awesome stuff Smitty. I love it!

    Erin

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  5. Thanks, everyone! I'm glad to see a mix of followers and anons enjoying this so far. Be sure to let me know which endings work for you and why, it will help me if I ever get the willpower to do another one of these.

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  6. It's very likely that I've missed one, but I only counted 18 of the supposed 19 endings (please forgive my OCD):


    1) 02b :: Run
    2) 02a-03b :: Decline
    3) 02a-03a-04a :: Show Who's boss
    4) 02a-03a-04b-05a :: Spit
    5) 02a-03a-04b-05b-06a-07a :: Stall
    6) 02a-03a-04b-05b-06a-07b :: Don't Know
    7) 02a-03a-04b-05b-06b-07a :: Heart
    8) 02a-03a-04b-05b-06b-07b :: Buzz
    9) 02a-03a-04b-05b-06c-07b :: Empty
    10) 02a-03a-04b-05b-06c-07a-08a-09abc :: Yes
    11) 02a-03a-04b-05b-06c-07a-08b-09a :: Slave
    12) 02a-03a-04b-05b-06c-07a-08b-09b :: Death
    13) 02a-03a-04b-05b-06c-07a-08c-09b :: Give In
    14) 02a-03a-04b-05b-06c-07a-08c-09b-10b :: Perfect
    15) 02a-03a-04b-05b-06c-07a-08c-09b-10a-11a
    16) 02a-03a-04b-05b-06c-07a-08c-09b-10a-11b
    17) 02a-03a-04b-05b-06c-07a-08c-09b-10a-11c
    18) 02a-03a-04b-05b-06c-07a-08c-09b-10a-11d

    I loved the CYOA series as a kid and your wonderful work is a great example of that. Thanks and happy holidays.

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  7. Sorry, #13 (Give In) should be 09a.

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  8. There is a 19th ending, but you can't get to it by making a choice. Try checking page numbers.

    And thanks for the handy chart. It looks a lot better than the one I had made and I'll leave it here for people who want to make sure they found all the endings.

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  9. you must have put so much work into this, its amazing!!

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  10. best caption ever !!!! amazing!!!

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  11. Smitty, as always, you are a master storyteller. I think you would have made a masteful bard or one of our elders from the time before written word was born. Bravo!

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  12. Smitty, all fetishes aside no one can deny the magnitude of this accomplishment. I've always known and respected you as the captioner all captioners should be, but you've raised the bar again.

    Since there is no award show for these things, I hereby give you the Lifetime Achievement Award For Pornographic Captioning. You HAVE changed the world; from now on anyone wishing to be considered great must now produce a captioned CHYOO. Congratulations.

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  13. this is unbelevable!!! Well done Smitty this is an amazing achievment.

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  14. Terrific! Great concept, and well executed. You should be proud. Thanks a ton!

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  15. Anymore in the works?

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  16. Smitty, this is an incredible piece of work. I congratulate you and thank you.

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  17. Also, as an afterthought, it might be nice to have a link to http://smittysimon.blogspot.com/2011/12/initiation-p-1.html from this page for easy navigation.

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  18. OK I am stunned at the depth and variety of caps. Groundbreaking and totally just mind-blowing!!

    Congrats on an epic series!

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  19. And so it begins.. I finally made my way through one of the many paths in your fantastic story and I'm going to try and post, in order, for every choice I made along the way.

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  20. I made this into a pdf as well as power point for use on your computer. Both work via buttons on the picture and clicking the text for your choices. The Power point version has some transitions but requires the use of power point viewer which is a free download.

    PDF version:
    http://www.mediafire.com/?y487xq52cfcmw7o

    Power point version:
    http://www.mediafire.com/?fesi7942f5o16he

    Just made this for fun, all credit to Smitty for allowing me to do this (Anon from p1 comments) If you notice any mistakes let me know, I was pretty thorough but you never know.

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    1. Sorry, I missed that you finished this. Thanks so much!

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  21. I can't say enough good things about this...it's so epicly, unbelievably, hot!! In so many different ways. It is a treasure...thank you Smitty. I feel like this doesn't get enough attention...I want to spread the word all over!

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    1. Thanks a bunch. And while I never mind more attention, I'm proud to say that this series has had over 20,000 unique views and almost half of those viewed every ending. Which is a lot better than I expected when I was writing it. So thanks everyone.

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