Sunday, March 4, 2012

Cuter than a bucket of babies (SvE pt4)

Smitta is back, but is she badder than ever? Find out in this next installment of Smitty versus Everyone. It helps to have read the prologue Smitta cap, but I think you can make due with just the prologue at the beginning of this saga.

I know I said I'd make a wiki, and I am working on it here and there, but it's kind of dull work and I often go back to capping instead. But I promise to get it done at least before the end of the first Act.

In the meantime, enjoy the series...


5 comments:

  1. Perplexing changes in Smitta and a foreboding alliance with the Technologist. Each chapter is incredibly engaging and reminds me that I have a lot of backstory to finish reading XP

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    1. Well I'm glad you've enjoyed it even despite some confusion. A lot more will become clear as it goes along, so then I can add new ways to confuse you until the next big reveal.

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  2. Wha? This wasn't Ricky v. Real Nightmare at all.

    Right, right. Story, Wiki, Plotty, Smitty, Sissy, Slutty, and Doc all need to be here for a brilliant mega project, but I'm sorry--part three had me in my seat with a tub of popcorn and a giant foam hand waiting to see a title fight.

    You know what? I don't even like Smitty v. Technologist. Stakes are too high. That means someone can't--or shouldn't--get away with whatever they're doing. I like Ricky because FUCK Ricky. Aviators are a dime per...nine I guess. Eight down, what's one more? Let #10 be the one important to the plot. Smitty and the Technologist have to be around because of BatmanJoker Syndrome. But fuck Ricky. Fuck her all day and all night, eight ways from Saturday. Because we can.

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    1. Well, the plots will follow the same pattern for this first act. Brother Salvation, Ricky,Smitta, and then Veronica (who's coming up in the next part). After the first chapter, it starts over the same way. There will always be a cliff hanger this way.

      As for the stakes being too high, I have good news and bad news. The bad news is the stakes are going to get hella high as this saga goes on, but the good news is you really won't feel like any of the characters are safe for very long. So none of the characters I've introduced in these first few parts HAVE to be around, and some of them may not be for much longer.

      And I can't say whether anyone should get away with whatever they're doing, but they definitely can. And I think by the end of the first act (14 chapters in all) you won't have any trouble finding someone to root for...or against.

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  3. I really like the changes in Smitta. And having 'Cay Cay' as a secondary consciousness is just too funny! I really look forward to seeing how all these aspects slowly come together!

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